Oh man what an ending! Kick ass story A++++++++++ in my book, Kev!

Jon

Thanks for the feedback! I did my best on the story, and had a lot of fun writing it. I would be interested to know what everyone liked or disliked about it.

K

I loved the story, too!! It entertained, it flowed... The only thing I didn't like (if I had to choose) was I don't know what happened when he went through the portal. Lol!

Very cool!!

Kevin,

I really enjoyed your story.

I'm looking forward to reading more of your writings.

You did a great job!

Jennie