Aaron, just finished reading parts 3 & 4 of your story. Loved it! I'm finding the Fey to be very interesting. They all have their own unique personalities and I like that. Once again, you leave me at a cliffhanger wanting more! Can hardly wait to see what happens next!
I also really enjoyed the story. I was reading through it and I'd get to the bottom of the page and be like "Wait, I'm on page 4 already? I don't remember going through it all so fast!" I like the fluidity and imagery of the writing, and the symbolism is neat, too. I hope you're not gonna leave us with another cliffhanger next issue! The suspense is killing me!