I really liked the story, Aaron. The action definitely slowed down with the tale from the nymph, but it didn't slow the overall pace of the plot, I felt. It told just what it needed to without dragging on, and I also felt like it set an ominous tone for things yet to come. It was well-crafted and well-executed. I never lost interest or felt compelled to check how much longer the story was. I really enjoyed it.

I look forward to the conclusion with bated breath!

Aaron,

I just finished reading parts 1 and 2 of your story. I really liked it!

Looking forward to the next part! Awesome job - great storytelling!

My vote was an "A"!