RJ,

Wow! What an awesome story! I really enjoyed it!

And I loved the short chapters. It was an easy but very interesting read. I love it when an author has one of his characters shift in their own perception of reality. Great job!

Looking forward to reading more of your work!

Jennie

Hi Jennie

I'm terribly sorry to have replied so late - I haven't got the hang of this forum (e.g. its existence or the fact that it doesn't alert authors automatically when there's a comment on their work). But thanks very much for reading and I'm really glad you liked it.

Best wishes

Rob